Republika ng Pilipinas (Philippines)

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The Character

County Name: Republika ng Pilipinas (Philippines)
Human Name: Maria Clara Carriedo dela Cruz
Gender: Female
Appearance:

She has brown eyes, and has long, brown hair, which reaches up to her hip. She has a headband which is designed in white Sampaguitas. She is wearing a white t-shirt with a red strap on the right shoulder. She is also wearing a red skirt that reaches up to her knees. She is wearing yellow slippers with the Philippines flag on it. She wears a flower bracelet which was handmade by the locals. She is also carrying a bag, which somehow can store anything. A bamboo stick is strapped to her back.

Personality: Philippines is a very happy-go-lucky girl. She is very aloof towards her surroundings, although once in battle, her senses will sharpen up. She is very fierce when it comes to battle. She is very friendly and sweet. She is known for her hospitality when it comes to fighting. She is the type of girl who can find a lot of friends. She is always smiling around other people. It's almost impossible not to smile around her, even if the person dislikes her. She will also help others in need. She is a morning person, by the way. (By morning, I mean like 4:30 am.)

When she is in a good situation or something good will happen, she will be genuinly happy for said person/event. She will be even more optimistic than usual.

When she is caught in a bad situation, she will try to do everything she can to help make it better. She is good in healing, so injuries won't be a problem for her, unless it is beyond her healing powers.

When around friends or family, Philippines will be always smiling and being optimistic. She loves to play outdoor games with them, especially with Italy Veneciano. She is also very open to them.

When around strangers, Philippines will first be wary about them. Eventually she'll open up to them, and try to make them her friends. She trusts people almost immediately, but break it, and she'll never be the same to the person again.

She can speak Filipino, Spanish, a little of Chinese and of course, English.

Her greatest fear is losing those her loved ones. If one of her loved ones or even a friend is sick or injured, she will try to do everything she can to help them recover. Because of this, people think that she is always into everybody's business, but all she wants in to make sure they're fine.

Weapon: She has a sharpened bamboo stick with her all the time, but eventually she'll use the gun America to her. She can also use anything that could be thrown (I.E. Slippers, brooms, brushes, etc.)

Likes:

• She likes food in general, and will eat anything. That includes England's cooking. She prefers her own cooking, though.
  
• She is also likes sweet things. Candy, chocolates, you name it.
  
• She loves animals, to the point where it's becoming creepy. She prefers dogs and fish, though.
  
• She loves playing sports, especially soccer and basketball.
  
• She likes to watch drama series with South Korea and Japan.
  
• She likes the daylight, since she is a morning person.
  

Dislikes:

• When people are fighting over each other. She likes to keep the peace between people.
  
• When someone is hurting her loved ones. She is very protective of family memebers, before you mess with her family, you have to go through her,
  
• Being lost. She can get distracted very easily, therfore getting lost in the process.
  

Strengths:

• She is a trained nurse, so she can aid the healers in the group.
  
• Her light personality can give hope and motivation to a person.
  
• She always keeps her word. She is as loyal as a dog.
  

Weaknesses:

• She is distracted very easily, which is not a good thing while battling The Thing.
  
• She falls asleep at 3:00pm sharp, no matter where. It is her siesta time, and she doesn't wake up until 5:00pm.
  
• She is very loud, to the point where she can actually surpass America's voice.
  

Sample Post:

Philippines was tired. Not hungry nor thirsty. Just tired. They have been battling the Thing for some time now. It didn't look eventhe slightest bit tired. Philippines stood up once again, and ran towards it. She didn't even think about anything else anymore. She held up her bamboo stick and smacked the Thing on the head. The Thing just smiled real creepy and slashed at her. Philippines gave a thump as she hit the hard, cold floor. She had this huge gash on her shoulder, and she was losing blood fast. Grunting, she stood up once more, only to fall right back down.

"Philippines!" Japan came running towards her. Grabbing her, he dragged her away just in time as the Thing slashed again. Running towards a bookshelf, he quickly hid themselves. Japan examined the gash on her shoulder. It was pretty bad. You could almost see the bone. Japan quickly tied it up with his jacket to prevent Philippines from losing more blood.

"J-Japan..... I'm fine." Philippines studdered. Spain and Italy quickly came running. Japan shook his head.

"You are injured. You need to stop fighting." Japan answered.

"Japan is right, Philippines. You must stop." Spain said, worry filling his voice.

"B-But... they...." Philippines stuttered.

"Ve~ Philippines, America and England can take care of themselves!" Italy answered.

"But they need my help!" Philippines stood up and ran towards the monster.

"H-Hey! Sit back down--" Japan tried to stop her, but it was no use. She was too close. Philippines slammed her bamboo stick on the Thing's body. The Thing stumbled backward and fell. Gasping, Philippines slumped forward. Her eyelids were slowly closing.

"Philippines!" America ran forward. Grabbing her shoulders, he shouted. "Philippines! No! Stay with us!" Philippines smiled, and mumbled something to America.

"Please....... get out of here...... for me......" Philippines winced.

"No! Philippines!" America shook her back and forth. "You can't die yet!" Japan rushed to her side with Spain, Italy, and England following.

"Sorry, but this is the end for me. Do me 2 things, please." Philippines pleaded.

"Anything! Just please don't die!" America said, corners of his eyes watering.

"One...... don't turn back time. We're so close to being free." Philippines smiled. Spain was already crying and Italy was sobbing quietly. Japan was maintaining a poker face, but you can read by his actions he was sad. England was behind America, ready to comfort him when needed.

"Two," She looked straight in to America's eyes. "Get out alive." And with that, Philippines closed her eyes.

America was crying. Not loud nor soft. Just crying. "Philippines......"

"I'll miss you."

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The Character

Name: Nins or Kitty

Timezone: GMT+8 Austrialian Western

[Mysterious Voice]

We apologize for the delay, and thank you very much for showing interest in Hetalia Replay. Unfortunately, we must REJECT your application.

While the voices feel it has a lot of potential, just as well as your original character does, it could stand for some more elaboration and variance. The details within the Phillipenes' personality section are very repetitive, in that it contains a lot of "she has", "she is", "when she". Try to begin your sentences in some different ways, and add commas into the mix as well. This will help your ideas sound a lot more sophisticated than they are coming across as with the repetition.

As for your character's likes, dislikes, strengths and weaknesses, they could stand to be a lot more specific. Most of what you have is pretty vague. For the sake of getting to the core of your character, even the minuscule quirks should be included, especially considering the fact that she is original, and no one else will be familiar with her as the voices are sure you are unless those details are there.

Your dislikes, strengths and weaknesses have also failed to meet the five bullet point minimum.

Despite this, you are free to submit a revised application if you so desire. Again, thank you very much for your interest.