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Post by romania on Aug 27, 2011 19:06:15 GMT -5
Edit; Fully accept the denied~ I MIGHT be going to reapp. Which means I'll be rewriting probably everything, so I don't want it to lie around as an distraction. Wouldn't learn from this otherwise.
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Post by Mysterious Voice on Aug 31, 2011 20:59:45 GMT -5
Good Evening, Nicku.
This voice struggles to find words at the moment, and therefore begs for patience.
Let this voice begin by saying this, so that there is no confusion as to what is being said here: You have given us every reason to deny your application in the note you left on your application. You specifically stated that you strayed from Himaruya's character, which this is. You specifically stated that you strayed FROM THE COUNTRY'S CULTURE. You specifically stated that you looked at it as a character and not a country, when they very specifically ARE countries-- the representations of them. You specifically stated that you knew that Romanians were probably very tired of the vampire subject. This voice can say that, yes, yes they are. You specifically stated that you were aware of all of these things but that it was "too hard to resist".
Sometimes, you should listen to urges that tell you not do things.
The voices cannot accept this character, and honestly, the writing voice does not even apologize if this seems extremely mean.
You have to understand that you are writing about a character that represents a NATION. a NATION that lives, and that has experienced a lot. But, you chose to focus on only ONE aspect of its past. To put it into perspective, that would be like making America a slave driver. It might not be as destructive, but it's focusing on just ONE aspect.
You have two more opportunities to make this application, if you would like, but you must wait twenty-four house after this message was posted before posting the new application. Should you reapply, please do try to read into the country a bit.
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